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Tomatoes, tomatoes, tomatoes.

Such treacherous, terrible tomatoes.

On my tongue, I do not love

My terrible, treacherous tomato.

Red is pretty. Orange is amazing

But on a tomato, what a disgusting

Zoo of ewww. Like fingernails on a chalkboard.

--Jessie, 4th Grade

 

With a hint of tartness. A little crunch. Blue on the outside, green inside. Imagine that, all in one combined. A little crown on top. It was air dancing on my tongue. Like the tartness of candy. As if it was a sunset on my tastebude. Yummy.

--Cameron, 4th Grade

 

The Jello was as red as blood. It was as shaky as an earthquake.

--Will, 4th Grade

 

The smell of onions was like losing a friend.

--Esme, 4th Grade

 

Once there was a blueberry. The bump on a blueberry with the seeds popping, like running laps at P.E. The color on the outside blue as the water's deep. The blue as can be, sprouting out of me. I see them on a tree outside. Sometimes sweet, sometimes sour, like someone you can't trust.

--Sydney, 4th Grade

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What have "Take My Word For It!" kids been up to? Check out Crocker Highlands:

Students in our after-school and community classes are exploring all the different ways writers generate ideas, and put captivating words on the page.

Here are writing excerpts and some photos of our young authors working with instructor, Lauran Weinmann at Crocker Highlands Elementary in the East Bay:

 

From “What Are You Made Of?” self-recipe exercise

 

By Grace

Grace (left), Gayatri (right) “Friday Spectacular”

Ingredients:

4 ½ pounds soccer

3 pounds Jamaican

15 tablespoons pizza lover

50 pounds awesome

1 pound second child

a pinch of singing

a handful of acting

 

Directions:

Take a handful of acting and put in a big mixing bowl. Grind it with a pinch of singing. Set aside for 57 minutes. Next take 4 ½ pounds of soccer and put it into a frying pan to get fried for 5 minutes and pour in other mixture. Next put in 1 pound second child, 3 pounds Jamaican background and 50 pounds of awesomeness. Pour both mixtures into heavy duty oven for 1 hour and 53 minutes. Serve with caramel sauce and milk.

 

From food writing – alliteration


By Noah

Crisp chips crunched, crackled, and condensed.

Chocolate chip cookies crumble quietly.

Vegan vinegar going vsh, vsh.

 

From food writing – love letter to a food

 

Claire (left), Shay (middle), Lauren (right) By Lauren

Dear Salmon,

You can be cooked so many ways: grilled, smoked, barbecued, teriakyed. I could go on for days!

 

From free write prompt: write a scene in a restaurant

 

By Gayatri

One day at a Thai restaurant an acrobat and an artist were sitting together. Their names were Big Bob Billy and Curly Kidd.

 

Noah (left), Max (middle), Ben (right) By Max

Artist Fratti was taking a walk when he saw Bok Choi and Lapchang having lunch as friends together, and he wasn’t invited.

 

By Ben

 He asked one of the men sitting there, “May I please borrow some salt,” in a strong British accent. He got no reply. Joey decided to just take the salt and leave. As he did so, a firm hand blocked his path.

 

From free write prompt: write from the perspective of a stack of paper sitting next to a shredder

 

By Claire

Oh great. At times like this I REALLY wish I had legs. Hi, I’m Carl -- page number one on this stack of bills sitting right next to the shredder.

 

By Shay

Death. That’s what I tasted in my mouth. The bloody, mushy, dry feeling.

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Come Hear Our Young Writers Read Their Original Work!

IMG_1270 In the next couple of weeks our talented writers will be showcasing some of the awesome writing they've been working on all Spring!

Look out for them at:

Musically Minded Academy (5776 Broadway, Oakland, CA 94618)

  • Chabot Elementary: Tuesday, May 31st @ 5:30pm
  • Crocker Highlands Elementary: Wednesday, June 1st @5:30pm
  • Thornhill Elementary (2nd & 3rd-5th): Monday, June 6th @5:30pm
  • Redwood Heights Elementary: Tuesday, June 7th @5:30pm
  • The Young Writer's Lab: Thursday, June 9th @5:30pm

San Ramon (tentatively at Rakestraw Books)

  • Walt Disney Elementary (2nd/3rd & 4th/5th): Tuesday, June 5th @ 5:30pm

Palo Alto

  • El Carmelo Elementary: Thursday, May 26th @ 5:30pm

San Francisco

  • Katherine Delmar Burke School: May 23rd @ 5:00pm
  • Flynn Elementary: May 25th @ 5:30pm

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