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Words from Our Young Authors at Havens Elementary

This Fall at Havens Elementary we concocted bedtime stories, faced our old fears of monsters, and more! See some of the excerpts we have to share with you below!

From “My Name Is"... prompt – students inserted an emotion or personality trait for “Name”:

My creativity is giant and growing. Every day. My creativity is made from dreams and everything around me. My creativity can be sad, happy, gory, awesome, shiny, gross and lots more.

-Jack

 

Excerpt from bedtime story:

One upon a time Pooh Bear, Christopher Robin, Owl, Rabbit, Eeyore, and Tigger were all standing on a cliff, watching the foamy waves crash against the shore. Pooh (that’s what everyone called him when he was silly) took a couple steps forward. When he was three steps away, a rock tripped him. “Poooooh!” everyone  screamed. “My life is ending!” Pooh called back.

-Sara

 

Excerpt from bedtime story:

Strike wondered where Luna had gone. She hadn’t told him a thing or left a note. Luna was in Braindude’s hideout. She was very scared. She thought that Braindude would eat her. She was in a dark structure that was old and covered from wall to wall and ceiling to floor with all sorts of gross things like webs, mice, rats and mold.

-Hannah

 

Excerpt from bedtime story:

Once Bo got to Dr. Mammoths’  house/lab/life he figured he shouldn’t use the doorbell so he just kicked the door open! “Aww Bo, hmmm, how did I know you were coming?” cackled Dr. Mammoth. “Because I have a brain.” Then, unexpectedly, a cage dropped right over Bo. Bad Luck!

1. Bo was trapped. 2. He really needed to use the bathroom. 3. He was bored and 4. well… nothing for #4.

-Jihae

 

From "This I used to believe":

I used to believe in the toilet monster. Whenever you flushed the toilet, a monster would jump out! It was very scary. One night I had a dream about the toilet monster. It had a toilet head, a water body, toilet fingers and toilet paper eyes! It was the scariest thing I’d ever seen. I was so scared of it that the next morning, I almost never went to the bathroom!

-Sophia

 

Excerpt from bedtime story:

Once upon a time there was a peanut named Paul the Peanut. Paul was not like ordinary peanuts. Paul could talk. When he was born, he never wanted to be eaten. He had nightmares about being eaten.

One day a little girl came up and got the peanut jar down from the shelf. Slowly, she twisted the jar. It popped open. She picked up a peanut. “Noooo!” cried Paul the Peanut. “Not Aunt Susan! Goodbye! I love you!”

-Harper

 

Excerpt from bedtime story:

The ground began to rumble and blackness surrounded the house. My mouth opened. The house had red blocks holding the roof up with glass windows next to every red block. Right in front was a small waterfall leading to a pond with Chinese fish. A rocky cement pathway led to the house’s red door. We entered the house.

-Eleanor

 

Excerpt from bedtime story:

Gloria is a flamingo. She has a great-great-great grandfather who is very old. He is a turtle and is 9,999. She hopes that he does not die. Her great-great-great grandfather’s name is Bob. Gloria’s great-great-great grandfather gave her a turtle shell as a gift. Ever since, she wears it as a hat. It is very fashionable. All the girls at school want one.

-Elizabeth

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Check us out! Havens Elementary TMWFI student writing samples

Recipe of Me by Alyssa

1. Get out your bowl and put in 50,000 gallons of fun.

2. Then put in 25 pints of milk.

3. Get your spoon and stir it. It should look like fun mixed with milk.

4. Put in 10 pounds of push pops.

5. Mix in 1,000,000 tons of animals.

6. Put in 0 ounces of math and 0 ounces of homework.

7. Then you are finished!

  Alyssa

Ode to Ice Cream by Jihae

Ice cream is delicious

its flavors are natural

but never would I eat potato or tomato

not even fatato

those ice creams sound impossible, unbearable, ineatable

Although...I do like strawberry, rainbow sherbert, and bubblegum

and these flavors are...stupendous and great, cool and creative

and what more could you say

because I love ice cream!

  Jihae

Food Fright by Heidi

I do not like brussel sprouts cus they taste like salt and they are stale. They also look like a ball of snot, so when my dad served it I screamed soooo loud I almost threw up. Then I lost my voice and so I will never eat brussel sprouts again.

 

Similes and Metaphors by Jack

Fudge is the most friendly thing to the taste bud itself. It looks like a lake of chocolate as bright as the sun. It comes in every shape and size. It is the perfect topping for all foods, fudge.

Jello looks like a solid sunset.

Broccoli looks like a bright tree that just sprouted from the ground. It tastes like all the four leaf clovers in Ireland.

  Jack

Ode to Pie by Amy

Oh pie, pie, pie

I love you so much

Perfect crust

Perfect filling

Perfect taste

Perfect everything

 

I love your sweet smell

It's like wonderful things

Smells like perfect pie

 

You suit best with ice cream

or just cream

Tastes well like that

Looks best like that

Like the shining star.

  Amy

Ode to Water by Madeline

Water

you refresh me

you cool me down

even when I'm not at the relays

held tight in my bottle

never to drip of it's own

accord

unless I dump it out

Madeline and Lucy

Recipe of Me by Lucy

1. Mix 5 cups of friends with 1.5 gallons of labradoodles until smooth.

2. Slowly add 1 gallon of soccer.

3. After soccer has been added, stir in 8 cups of climbing trees.

4. Add 5 cups of friends and whisk for a decade.

5. Stick in oven for 2 hours.

Serves 4 people.

Personification by Luke

Carl is a corn chip who was abandoned at a Mexican family reunion, surprisingly in Canada. He then went to work for the C.I.A. Corn chip Intelligence Association, but then discovered it was too intense for a corn chip like him. He then auditioned to be Mary Poppins in a Broadway play. He got booed so badly he forgot what the words good and show meant. When he was 297, he was awarded the oldest corn chip alive. He later went to Vegas and went broke. He went to his old friend Sally Celery. She also went to Vegas and won every slot she played. But she still ended up broke because Carl stole her money. Later he just sat in a hotel for half an hour and then he went into hibernation.

Luke

Similes and Metaphors by Cassia

Avocado looks as slimy as a slug. It has a toxic green color. It tastes like cricket guts. It poisons my tastebuds.

Jello is as cool and fruit as a gummy bear.

Cassia

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