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Read It Here First! Waxing Poetic at Commodore Sloat

The lucky students at Commodore Sloat are finishing up their fifth year of a TMWFI poetry residency. We have seen these young poets learn, grow and create some powerful works of poetry. This week they had a poetry reading at school lead by our Teachers Emily and Celeste. Thanks to our Sloat 3rd graders and parents for being such a respectful audience.

Scroll down to find your child's poem and ask them to perform it for you. If you have time read all the pieces, they are profound, wise, silly and great windows into these kids' minds.

 

Commodore Sloat 4th grade Poets.

Poems from Mr Kenney's Students:

Poems from Ms. Kabash's Students:

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Read It Here First! 3rd Grade Poets at Commodore Sloat

Late in December we held our annual Poetry Reading at Commodore Sloat Elementary School in San Francisco. The audience of second graders was polite and quiet while the third grade poets shared their pieces.

Below is a selection of poems written during our Poetry Residency at Commodore Sloat. The students imagined what lives inside their hearts; personified peace; composed letters to animals, and even wrote about shoelaces! All in all, the works are a mixture of wild imagination, silliness and profound honesty - a true representation of childhood.

Sloan, Audrey, Julian, Mackenzie, Maya, Nathan and William reading their poems:


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Ascend Oakland: "I am from here and I am from there"

Our students at Ascend Elementary School in Oakland wrote and performed this group poem as part of December's Expo. Thanks to Oakland Leaf for running this great after-school program and for giving us the opportunity to work with these young writers!  (Note: The bold text at the beginning and end of the poem was said together as a group.)

Soy de aquí y soy de allá.

I am from here and I am from there.

 1. (Briceyda)

I am from a place where there is a lot of music

My mom is from Mexico and my dad is from Mexico too

Where there is lightning that turns the sky bright

 

2. (Sarah)

I am from Oakland.

My family is from Guatemala.

I am from the taste of lemons.

 

3. (Shantal)

I am from the game of tag and basketball

And from arts and crafts,

From calm music

Y pepinos con sal, limon, y chile

 

4. (Marlyn)

Soy de Oakland.

Soy de arte.

Mis padres son de Guatemala.

Me gusta el color verde.

 

5. (Lucas)

I am from a green house with bright colors:

Red, blue, white, brown, and pink.

We all live together:

Mom, dad, brother, sister, and grandma.

 

6.  (Xochitl)

I am from Oakland.

I am from my sister’s bedroom.

We came from a turquoise house.

 

7. (D’angelo)

I am from a blue house with lots of toys

My dad is from Honduras

My mom is from California

And we all love each other

 

8. (Amy)

Soy de Oakland California

My mom and dad are from Mexico

Se movieron en una brown house

Y después en una rosita casita

 

9. (Keyla)

I am from the sun.

My house is as bright as a rainbow.

 

10. (Nagely)

I am from Oakland.

My family is from El Salvador.

My niece is from El Salvador and Mexico.

The colors of El Salvador are Blue and White.

The colors of Mexico are red, white, and green.

 

11. (Karen)

Soy de Guatemala

Where the flag is blue and white.

Soy de Oakland

Where there are lots of buildings.

Soy de Ascend

Where there are many classes and kids. 

 

We are from here and we are from there.

Somos de aquí y somos de allá.

¡Somos Ascend!


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Read It Here First: Bret Harte After School Expo

This semester we have been treated to some powerful writing by our students at Bret Harte in Oakland.  The student pieces have been thought provoking and well written.

Below are four pieces that were presented at the Bret Harte After School Expo. They just might convince you that we should let the children rule the world, at least for a little while.

Poem: "If I ruled the world" by Dustin

Opinion Writing: "Am I free or not?" by Ethan

Free Write: "Restriction and Liberation" by Calvin

Opinion Writing: "Are humans a virus on Earth?" by Steven

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Read it Here First - Summer Camp Excerpts

What did you do this summer? Take My Word For It! held On Demand Summer Camps. During camp, students had an opportunity to reflect, practice and build on their creative writing skills. Below are two excerpts from poems our students created this summer using personification.

Gabby reading to the other campers.

My Name Is by Myla


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Why Not Write Wednesday: Let's write a poem

Every Wednesday our creative writing prompt encourages you to take up your pen and indulge your author self

Today's writing prompt is courtesy of Beth Cregan, a counterpart doing what we do way over in Australia. writeawaywithme.com.

How about trying a list poem? Here are some topics to try:

  • Things That Make Me Happy

  • 15 Things I Want For Dinner

  • Things I’m Good At

  • Things That Make Me Different

  • 10 Things I Couldn’t Care Less About

  • Things I Love Doing On The Weekend

Share with us! Post your writing in the comments section of our blog!

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