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Words from Our Young Authors at Park Day, Grades 2-3

This session’s curriculum has been Poetry Palooza! Students have thrown themselves headlong into odes, alliterative poems, free-form poems, riddle poems, nature poems and more. Students have sharpened their metaphors, honed their personifications and written through all five senses. The results speak for themselves.  From: On Turning Ten, an examination of the free-form poem by Billy Collins

On Turning Ten

On turning ten I hope to still be able to Still play imaginary games Still want to learn about Greek Mythology Still have time to go swimming and ride my bike

What scares me about growing up is that I might not be able to imagine the same thoughts I am thinking right now ever

-Zoe K

 

From: Imitation of the poem “Life Doesn’t Frighten Me At All” by Maya Angelou

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Snakes slithering on the ground Spiders creeping up the wall Darkness in the sky Clowns with red noses Sharks swimming through water They don’t frighten me at all

-Zoe M

From: Poetry with a rhyme scheme

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Lightning strikes the highest peak Sometimes it makes a little leak You fall from so high in the air Sometimes you give me a little scare

-Dolci

From: Odes to things

Cookie

Sweet Yummy You are crunchy You make me happy and excited when I bite into you Lovely Awesome Appreciated

-Meera

 

From: Odes to things

Snow Leopard

I see you pounce around the forest missing, jumping, getting food Oh dear snow leopard why so prancy? why so pretty, why so dancy?

I see you try to climb trees high I see you fall, I see you cry. In the snow I see you eat I see you kill, I see you eat meat.

Oh dear snow leopard why so prancy why so pretty, why so dancy?

-Aidan

 

From: Odes to things and experiments with the 2nd person

Light

Sunny colors orange and yellow you help me see in the dark your light can change every part of my day at daybreak you’re up and lighting up my day at dusk your light is dark orange and the skies are purple, blue and pink people celebrate your light in Alaska

-Meilin

From: Odes to things and experiments with the 2nd person

Monkeys

O Monkeys swinging through the sunny trees O screeching, so ever can be I hear rustling through the leaves I see you through the greenish grass I watch you from my windowsill, playing

-Anonymous

 

From: A letter poem

Dear painting,

I am very glad you are here to excite my simplicity to add your color to my blank white surface And just so you know, my best color is orange So please can I have orange?

Sincerely, Canvas

-Ellie

 

From: A letter poem

Dear Wasabi

Dear Wasabi,

I like the spiciness you give to me. I like when you swim in the soy sauce.

Sincerely, Sushi

-Max

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Words from Our Young Authors at Park Day, Grades 4-6

This session’s curriculum has been Poetry Palooza! Students have thrown themselves headlong into odes, alliterative poems, free-form poems, riddle poems, nature poems and more. Students have sharpened their metaphors, honed their personifications and written through all five senses. The results speak for themselves. From: Odes inspired by Pablo Neruda

Ode to the Pool

cool mysterious you cool me down on hot days but you splash too much even when I do not want you to often I am scared of the secrets you hold in the depths of your figure but I cannot stay mad forever.

-Ciel

 

 

From: What frightens us. Poems inspired by “Life Doesn’t Frighten Me At All” by Maya Angelou.

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No, no, no. I’m not afraid of heights. Bats or rats climbing up the wall. I am brave. I do not fear I shall drown. Spiders creeping up my back, bears getting ready to attack. No, I am brave. The dark, a fire being lit, snakes all around, are you afraid? I’m not. No, I’m brave. If I’m lost, no one around, I’m not afraid. The deep dark water under a beach, the dragon chasing me. I’m not afraid. I’m brave, brave, brave.

-Leila

 

From: Nature poems inspired by Mary Oliver

Things in Nature

The wind blows, I turn, behind a tree a golden dust is blown from its birthplace a plant, light green feathers bending down to help bugs go to higher ground. I walk one step – crunch the debris and undergrowth – stop as I go. Three more steps and I’m there. The tree is large, red, majestic. I float towards it, pulled against my will.

-Clara

 

From … : Nature poems inspired by Mary Oliver

Mist

Hiding the lock from the key, it is a mystery without an answer. The cool water spreads like a wave, hung, suspended, shrouding the reality from the familiar. Clouds are thoughts, full of desperation and hunger, layering the earth with beads of sweat as I shudder… the smell crisp and damp, beginnings and endings. The darkness behind you and the light ahead, a scale close to tipping. The world is mist, impermanent, ever shifting.

-Jo

From: Odes inspired by Pablo Neruda

Ode to Joshy

Scared hopeful lingering in the town as the Boy with the bread You sacrifice your skills and hope for falling help Desire flickering behind your crystal eyes Glory thoughts Calloused fingers Broken nails. You reach your head through the heat and your generosity is not forgiven and it never, ever will be.

-Mattie

 

From: Riddle poems

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You can walk down and around me. I bridge the gap between the view of a bird and the view of a snake. You can see me but I cannot see. On me your foot you place. At the end of me opposites lay the rich and the poor try to stay out of each other’s way. I am a gate and a barrier to two different worlds and from me you can see little boys and little girls.

-Ari

 

From: Alliteration poems

Purple

Perfectly perfect purple purpleness Pleasantly pleasant purple puffiness Purply pens purpleness perfection Purple paths perfectly pathy Penny Purple pummeled Pat Purple Purple Perfect Perfection Purpleness.

-Malayna

 

 

From: What frightens us. Poems inspired by “Life Doesn’t Frighten Me At All” by Maya Angelou.

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When the darkness closes in, When happiness seems to vanish, When the world seems to jolt and swing. When the shadows overwhelm you, When the shouts penetrate, When the voices scream and your ears bleed. When the sky seems so dark, When the stars seem impossibly far, When the candlelight in your eyes is blown out, You stumble for something to grab, the comfort of a friendly hand, Hope is that object, that hand, that comfort, that gets you through the day.

-Ruby

 

From: Riddle poem

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My mask reveals everything you see me in the dark but not in the light my tail is ringed with black wings. My environment is cities and forests I’m vicious with a square, rounded head your trash can is my bed.

-Cate

 

From … : What frightens us. Poems inspired by “Life Doesn’t Frighten Me At All” by Maya Angelou.

Life Doesn’t Frighten Me At All

Big red spiders being a rollercoaster rider life doesn’t frighten me at all. Flaming hot fire, I ain’t no liar, life doesn’t frighten me at all. Big waves may gobble me up, and all I say to strangers is ‘sup for life doesn’t frighten me at all. Sleek slithering snakes terrorists that aren’t fake for Pete’s sake, life doesn’t frighten me at all. When I have to say goodbye I don’t cry I just sigh life doesn’t frighten me at all.

-Jake

 

From: Odes inspired by Pablo Neruda

Ode to S’mores

Sticky creamy S’mores are made with Graham cracker, marshmallow, and chocolate and when they combine a tasty superpower. When you are hungry at a camp S’mores are just the thing the fun thing is that you have to melt it in the fire pit of doom then you bite into it it melts in your mouth and you feel relieved.

-Cayele

 

From: Odes inspired by Pablo Neruda

Ode to Clocks

You are very loud when I am trying to sleep. Without you I would be late for everything or never arrive.

-Paola

 

From: What frightens us. Poems inspired by “Life Doesn’t Frighten Me At All” by Maya Angelou.

Life Doesn’t Bother Me At All

Schoolgirls bragging little siblings nagging life doesn’t bother me at all. Itchy, itchy toes get sprayed with the hose life doesn’t bother me at all. Loud gum smacking sarcasm lacking life doesn’t bother me at all. Broken pencils uneven stencils life doesn’t bother me at all. Fluttering bugs too-tight hugs old men singing high-pitched ringing life doesn’t bother me at all. Balloons loud popping budget-free shopping life doesn’t bother me at all.

-Olivia

 

From … : Repeating lines and the personification of abstractions

When Joy Goes Home

When joy goes home Dad starts to scream Trees start to fall My life gets worse and worse. When joy goes home Mom starts to cry Buildings start to crumble My life gets worse and worse. When joy goes home Sister pounds the ground Everything is breaking up My life gets worse and worse. When joy goes home Brother kicks the furniture Everyone is dying My life gets worse and worse. Then joy returns Trees grow back Buildings stop crumbling Dad stops screaming Mom stops crying Sister stops pounding Brother stops kicking Everything comes back together Everyone lives My life gets better and better.

-Sonia

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