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Bogdan Wonders About the Mind

Where Does a Mind Go When It's Lost?

Does a mind get lost? Does your mind stay on track? Can your mind keep up with you? What if we had no mind? What if your mind wandered, and you were able to follow it?

-Bogdan, Sloat Elementary School

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Pearce Directs James Bond On His Next Mission

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James Bond, you have a new mission. first you have to go to Till's Land Island. Then you must go over the Tomb Hills, and then you have to walk aside the lake. After that you must cross the bridge, then climb the everlasting, ever-erupting, red-orange, earth-created volcano. Then walk over more round, green hills, and then you will find the treasure!

From, Your Boss

P.S. I am pretty sure the treasure is a pigeon with a pack of gum. P.P.S. I think the bridge might be broken. P.P.P.S. I am actually pretty sure that there is no volcano. P.P.P.P.S. Call me at five or whenever you get the treasure.

-Pearce, Joaquin Miller Elementary

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What's Up with Girls on the Go Camp?

Our theme for the week of August 19 - 23 was "Magical Realism". We started off on Monday by defining Magical Realism - stories where things appear ordinary, except for one strange and wonderful magical element - one that's often hidden and only known to some of the characters. We talked with the girls about books that they had probably read or heard of  - Coraline, Charlotte's Web, Alice in Wonderland - and asked them to think about why these stories would be included in the category of Magical Realism.

Their assignment: to ponder what kind of magical element they would want to feature in a story sketch and to think about it during their travels. We furnished them with some suggestions such as: What if hidden messages were written on the underside of leaves? What if mysterious music emanated from man hole covers? What if you had the ability to read people's minds whenever you boarded a bus or BART train?

On Wednesday we introduced the concepts of character and conflict, antagonist and protagonist and encouraged them to consider how their element of magic would fold into their story.

By Friday, most of the girls had a detailed idea of their story's structure and had developed a main character and an antagonist. We finished Friday's session by letting them draw detailed maps of the worlds they came up with. Some of them completed a prologue to their story as well. Oh, and we also fit in some word games and a round of "Exquisite Corpse"!

There were some really unique and creative ideas including a world where a young girl can travel back to the time of the president appearing on any bill in her wallet, and a world where cats, when they walked through their cat doors, entered another dimension!

Thanks for signing up your daughters for Girls on the Go!  Please ask them to tell you about the fantastic worlds they created.

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Our theme for the week of July 15 - 19 was "Found Treasures and Scavenger Hunts"!

Here are a few of the pieces from TMWFI and Girls on the Go camp this week!

In this writing activity we asked the campers to write about things they've lost:

Julia's "What have I lost?"

My mom's mom to cancer

My 4th uncle to a heart attack

My dad's dad to a sudden death

A friend I knew since 1st grade because

she's moving to Singapore

My fear of death

My fear of heights

My (now dead) goldfish

2 pair of ice skates

My 1st cello

My 1st piano

8 of my baby teeth

A lot of lead pencils

My BF

My 1st - 10th birthday cake

My long hair

 

Olivia R's "Lost Things"

1. Words I have been hurt

by

2. A friend

3. My sadness

4. Some earrings

5. My fav. shorts

6. My fishes

7. My fav. dress

 

Elizabeth's "Things I've Lost"

Aunt Esther

Childhood innocence (due to middle school)

Friends and enemies

Wheat tolerance

About 8 earring backings

My willingness to believe

My nail biting habit

My dad's camera case

2 soggy, muddy, disgusting blackened (though originally white)

Socks lost to gilli's grove

A pair of white chords- accidentally

Washed with blue underwear

Clothes that I've grown out of

A 4 year old light blue fleece

All of my baby teeth

A whole lot of hair bands

My love for the Beatles (when I saw

What Paul McCartney showed up, botoxed

At the Oscars

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Sonyamia Makes Funky Phrases

Cool Random Words

1. Red cherry baseball coat 2. Cookie dough moon star 3. Gummy blue green coke 4. Orange ocean octopus 5. Fizzy coke brown eye 6. Gummy leaf globe bear 7. Grey liquid purple cube 8. Raspberry banana boaty 9. Icy cream cloud 10. Cotton Candy dream bubble 11. Air head tape pencil 12. Journal double bubble fish

-Sonyamia, Hillcrest Elementary School

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Noah's autobiography, poem style

I Am From

I am from reading libraries I am from the over-512-branch family tree I am from playing video games I am from my bed I am from my friends I am from laughing at stand-up comedy I am from across the street I am from my mom and dad I am from my cousins ...and my sister I AM FROM EVERYTHING I am from doodling I am from randomness I am from annoying songs I am from 42 I am from laughing I am from myself I am from my thoughts I am from ....you too! I am from other people: being encouraging being happy being funny I AM FROM ME I AM FROM MEEEEEEEEEEEE.

-Noah, Hillcrest Elementary

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Hannah Sheds Light on the Glory of the Manzanita Tree

Manzanita

Soft green Colored leaves Sway in the breeze When they are ready They Dance Away in the sweet warm wind

On the inside Cooled with water Always cold for me

It's bark Crimson Peeling Burned dark by the sun

So if you are free Come sit with me Under the Glory Of the Manzanita tree

-Hannah, Thornhill Elementary

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