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April's Teacher Spotlight

Want to get to know some of the creative writing masters behind “Take My Word For It!”? Meet this month’s teacher spotlight, Apollo Papafrangou!

Name: Apollo Papafrangou

Currently working at: Thornhill Elementary

Hometown: Oakland, CA

What’s your favorite bookstore? Diesel Books. Good selection of titles, friendly staff, and it's walking distance from my house!

What’s your favorite VERB? Persevere.

If your life was a book, what would be the title? "The Chronicles of a Gentleman."

Did a teacher or another writer inspire you to write? How? A local author named Jess Mowry inspired me to begin writing seriously at the age of twelve. I had written stories prior to reading his work, but his lyrical fiction -- about Bay Area youth -- resonated with me to such a degree that I wanted to write a book of my own.

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Words from Our Young Authors at Sonoma Mountain Elementary

This Winter we explored the wonderful world of food in our “Peanut Butter and The Pen” curriculum. We practiced writing vivid descriptions of food, using adjectives and active verbs, similes and metaphors. Students wrote stories, advertisements, warnings and odes, as well as a “Recipe of Me.” Read some of our favorite excerpts from the session below!  From an experience trying a suspicious food for the first time:

I thought frog legs were not good tasting but after I went to the same buffet for the second time, my mom urged me to eat the frog legs. To my surprise, the fried frog legs weren’t mushy. The fried frog legs were not that salty. It tasted a bit like chicken.

- Alan

Mushrooms have a mushy, gushy, slimy and nasty taste. I think they look cool, but taste gruesome. They should be against the law. They have a frothy texture. I forever hate mushrooms. The first time I tried them I felt sick!

- Sophia

From an exercise using similes, metaphors and/or personification to describe the following foods:

Chips taste like something from Yellowstone Park. Corn on the cob tastes like little rubber tents filled with liquid. Jello looks like a see-through jelly substance. Bubble gum looks like cooked slime brains. Barbeque ribs taste like the ribs of an alien animal with traditional smushed brain sauce.

Nathaniel

From a prompt – A mad scientist invents a new glow-in-the-dark food using weird ingredients, and tries to get an unsuspecting kid to volunteer to eat it:

A mad scientist invents a glow in the dark food that contains globs of chewed up liver, killer zombies and 18,000,000,000 glow worms.

Dominic

From a prompt – Describe your breakfast this morning using all five of your five senses:

The fried eggs I had for breakfast were golden brown. Bubbles appeared and instantly popped, creating a sizzling sound. Its aroma filled the air.

Zenas

Once there was a vial. It lived happily with his test tube brothers. Then one day there was a mad scientist and he poured a green liquid into the vial and the vial turned evil. He poured himself into drinks and food. Then one day he made the mistake of pouring himself into a rich person’s drink and it was then that he met his enemy the antidote, who saw the person choking and went to the rescue. (To be continued...)

Cody

 

From a prompt –I discovered a new food: CHEESTERAMBOCCOLLI. What is it?

Cheesteramboccoli is cheese with broccoli. It looks like broccoli drizzled with cheese. The broccoli is cooked with oil and fried, and the cheese is melted.

Emma

From an ode – a poetic form written either to praise or pay tribute to the subject of the poem (in this case, food):

Ode to Orange Chocolate Ganache

Spit out your orangey flavor Give me thick, coarse dark chocolate Don’t just leave me I will always love your flavor Now, you may leave me now Wait! May I have another bite?

Tiffany

From creating a food character (personifying food) and writing its story:

Patty Potato was doing nothing one night in her Potatomobile but licking her pink hair. She then saw the potato signal and jumped into the potato suit. She zoomed through the produce section and into the frozen aisle. There, standing with stainless steel throwing sporks, was Annette Applehead. She hurled a spork at Patty but Patty dodged, and the spork hit some microwave lasagna. When Patty turned around, Annette was gone. She hopped in her vehicle and zoomed through the chips and bean dip section. She got out of the mobile and searched the aisle. “Kieahh!!” came a loud cry. Patty jerked her head towards the sound, just in time to see Gabe Garbonzo bean leap on top of her. She shucked him off, and pushed a secret button. A bowl appeared out of nowhere and cooked him! (Continued...)

Daniel

From a Recipe of Me – write ingredients that include characteristics about you, plus measurements and directions for preparing, cooking and serving:

This great looking recipe is full of strange, awesome ingredients. After eating this you’ll jump as if you are doing gymnastics!

1. Add 20 teaspoons of kindness with 12 ounces of candy lover. Stir in 1 big bowl.

2. Blend 9 cups of shyness with 100 tablespoons of gymnast. Add a little less than ½ of a micropinch of kind sister. Put into 2nd bowl. Cook in pan until turned into cake.

3. Last, add caramel to 1st bowl and make frosting out of it. Drench the frosting over cake and... EAT!!!

Audrey

 

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"Take My Word For It!" Partners with Girls on the Go for Summer Camp!

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"Take My Word For It!" Partners with Girls on the Go for Summer Camp!

 

This summer we're thrilled to collaborate with Girls on the Go to bring a "Take My Word For It!" creative writing focus to 3 Berkeley camp sessions in July and August! Campers will be travelling with pencils in hand drawing their writing inspiration from their adventures.

 

 

Make sure to register for one of the following dates!

 

Ages: 9-13 Location: Berkeley Times: Basic Day: 8:00-4:00, Extended Care: 4:00-6:00 Prices: Basic Day: $360/week, Extended Care: $420/week

 

- Schedule for the week of July 15-19 -

Monday July 15:  We will begin our morning with a writing workshop in Oakland. Afterward get ready to rock climb at the Great Western Power Company.

Tuesday July 16:  First we’ll take a Precita Eyes Mural Tour in San Francisco. After we work up an appetite, we’ll enjoy some Papusas.

Wednesday July 17: Our second writing workshop for the week will take place in Berkeley then we’re off to San Franisco where we will eat lunch and have some ice-skating fun.

Thursday July 18: Swim Day at Lake Anza, Tilden Park, Berkeley. We will take an incredible hike from the bus stop down into the park.

Friday July 19:  We will head to Playland-Not-At-The-Beach in El Cerrito for some carnival and arcade games. Then we will have our last writing workshop for the week in Berkeley.

 

Girls on the Go offers field trip camps in the Bay Area camp where girls can explore, learn, and share in a fun, respectful environment. Campers learn about travelling by bus and BART and see a variety of Bay Area locations!

 

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Why Not Write Wednesdays? Creative Writing Prompts for Kids!

Every Wednesday our creative writing prompt challenges you to pick up your pen and indulge your author self! Today's prompt inspires you to get creative visually! Ever been told not to play with your food? Well we think that's a waste. Get inspired to make your own edible art and then....dig in!

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Words from Our Young Authors at The Booksmith in San Francisco

This winter at the Booksmith, the kids have been exploring the magic of flight. In addition to producing imaginative free writes and participating in group writing games, students have written numerous works based on our central theme. These pieces include letters from Amelia Earhart, flights of fancy and stories written from the point of view of Icarus and Daedalus. Simultaneously, students have strengthened their prose by experimenting with craft elements such as personification and metaphor. Check out their favorite excerpts from the selection below!  

From: Flights of Fancy exercise in which students let their imagination soar.

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My name is Sona Fly. I live in Criphea. My people are called Crisows, but people also call us fairies or flowers because our powers come from flowers. But for the past few months, the lands of Criphea, Somolian, Tolia and Gronzy have been in great danger. The Vortorians hate nature, peace and goodwill but the rest of us don’t. Now they have developed a powerful weapon called Foral which can turn smog into nature and nature into smog.

-Lainey

 

From: Flights of Fancy exercise in which students let their imagination soar.

The Fairy Who Touched The Moon

Many moons ago slept an Elephant Fairy, Rose. She loved elephants. One moon she decided to touch the moon. But how would she do that? The other fairies said, “Ha! We all have proper wings but you have elephant ears for wings! You are so ugly!” “Go away,” said Rose. She thought, I will fly to the moon and prove to the others that I am a proper fairy.

-Ava

 

From: My Name Is Poem

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My name is Phoebe. My name is made from gold and sparkling silver. I found my name in the Phoebe bird. My name can lift up boulders and cliffs. If I lost my name, the whole world would catch fire.

-Phoebe

 

From: The flight of a bumblebee

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I am a bee. I eat bears for breakfast. One day my hive explodes and all the bees fly away. I fly to another hive but an aardvark eats me. Then the aardvark eats the rest of the bees and we all live happily ever after.

-Christopher

 

From: One morning a bumblebee oversleeps and wakes up to find the hive empty!

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I woke up one morning and had my breakfast of honey. No one else was here, but it didn’t bother me because everyone always wakes up before me. I flew around looking for my best friend. There was not a single bee in the hive. I found a sign at the entrance: HIVE FOR SALE – please bring all the honey from this hive to our new hive in Flowerville. I was much too lazy to fly all the way to Flowerville, so I decided to stay and eat honey and not have to fly around flowers ever again for lunch. I took down the sign and put up a new sign: SOLD, it said. I went to the honey storage area. There was a lifetime supply there for 20 bees! For 5 days I lived the life of luxury. Then, on the 6th day, 12 wasps came to the hive.

-John Francis

 

From: One morning a bumblebee oversleeps and wakes up to find the hive empty!

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He stumbled over to his mother’s bedroom, still half-asleep. He installed himself in Bee’s bed and got robots to bring him junk food while he watched TV. So the days passed. A month later, Sleepybee heard a faint knocking at the entrance. He looked through it. Nobody. While he tried to figure out what happened, a wasp climbed into the window. Other wasps, who had thrown rocks at the walls, hid behind leaves, waiting for the signal to invade. When the signal came, the wasps’ leader, Stinger, herded the large group through the entrance. “Yaaah!” screamed a wasp warrior, brandishing an axe. The raiding party stuffed honey into wax containers. Sleepybee was soon found, hiding behind the door.

-Isabella

 

From: Personification of an object in flight

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I hang onto my tree as I’m painted in crimson and gold. The wind blows in fall and I twirl. My grasp loosens. Again the wind rushes past me and I twirl faster and faster. Slowly I lose the branch and gracefully I fall to the ground with my other friends. I blow southward, twirling more and more. After weeks I am slowly broken down. I lay down peacefully, painted mostly brown, too tired to get up.

-Amanda

From: Sensory description of an object in flight (superhero)

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Different problems different places Wind breeze in the air Rushing, whipping through my hair Like a fan in a home Saving people left and right Saving by day, sleeping by night

-Yudi

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Words from Our Young Authors at Beach Elementary

This session at Beach we are exploring the elements of a good mystery. Our students have been crafting mystery stories and learning all about creative writing techniques, from character and plot development to using concrete details and the five senses to tell a story. We’ve been having a great time! Here are some teasers...

From: Describe a setting with the five senses.

In the woods

The woods smelled of bark. The sun shone through the trees. Birds chirped and flew from tree to tree. Squirrels ran among the leaves on the ground and ran from branch to branch. A small creek twisted between trees. Freshly fallen leaves flowed down the stream. A woodpecker pecked at a tree. Slick wet rocks poked above the water.

-Phoebe

From: A free write with the prompt “This is one story I’ve never told anyone.” 

Bang! Thunder crashed outside the house. The house shook as if made of paper. The foundation rattled and creaked. It didn’t sound like the old place could sustain anymore wear. Drip. Drip. Drip, drop, drip. Drip, drop, drip, drop. There was a leak directly above my bed. I rolled over and tried to sleep but I couldn’t.

-Calla

 

From: A free write with the prompt “I thought it was just a glitch in my computer...” 

I thought it was just a glitch in my computer. But that was yesterday, before I discovered that I was in a newspaper that said I was the most wanted man in the world. I went downstairs to talk to my parents, when they shrieked and called 9-1-1. I said, ‘I’m your son, not a fugitive.” They ran out of the house. What had I done?

-Rohan

 

From: How to organize a mystery around "Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?" using the prompt “It was missing.” 

Leah Weavin Mysteries Book 2 The Clue in the Note-Clock-Private-Book 

The mysterious object started floating in the air. Nobody knew what it was except me. I knew it was a note-clock-private-book. That is a notebook with a built-in automatic clock and a fold out thingy so you can write privately. People from all around town were gathering to see it. I’m Leah. Leah Weavin. I called my two best friends, Jane and Derik. I told them where I was and that they needed to get over here.

-Maria

 

From: Change or add a twist ending to a common fairytale. 

Little Blue Riding Hood

One sunny morning Little Blue Riding went skipping through the forest all the way to her grampa’s house. On the way there she met a sly mean looking fox that acted suspiciously nice to her. Little Bue Riding Hood ran away from the fox as fast as her dainty legs could carry her. Once she arrived she quickly tossed the wine bottle to her grampa and was halfway out the door when she noticed something very weird about her grandpa. She rushed back inside.

-Helena

 

From: Describe a setting using the five senses. 

In a damp bright place that smells like rain and dew, that has birds that chirp so soft. Your mouth is dry and sticky. You see trees and vines and really pretty flowers. You touch the flowers. They feel really soft and silky, practically perfect.

 -Olivia

From: A suspenseful mystery

There he was the evil scientist, James P. Beciss. When I went in, I saw my six friends in clear glass tubes in animal form.

"Oh my," I said.

"I knew you would come!" said James and he put his hand out and pulled me in to his black scarred hands." (To be continued...)

-Mingxin

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