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Why Not Write Wednesdays? Creative Writing Prompts for Kids (and Adults)!

Mother's Day is coming up - a day to celebrate mothers, of course, as well as all of the other fabulous women in our lives: grandmothers, sisters, aunts, daughters!

In honor of those women, why not write about them? Here are a few prompts to get you started.

Describe your grandma. What doe she smell, feel, look like? What reminds you of her?

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Pick a woman that you are close to in your family. Does she have a particular way of making you feel special? Write her a thank you poem using sensory details.

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Write about a famous mother (or aunt, sister, daughter, grandmother) in the world that you admire. Why do you admire her?

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Why We Ask Our Kids to Write by Hand

Why We Ask Our Kids to Write by Hand

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IMG_1391-620x465We're old school - we ask that our students write with pencils on paper and discourage them from using iPads or laptops.

 

There's a reason behind our request: writing on paper exercises a different part of our brains.

 

In a Wall Street Journal article, Gwendolyn Bounds cites research supporting this fact. It turns out that forming letters by hand enhances overall learning, idea comprehension and expression. The hand has a special relationship to the brain so when forming the shapes that create letters it is "working harder" and creating more neural connections than when selecting a button with a character on it. In addition, our handwriting becomes part of who we are - think of how we feel when we come upon a letter handwritten written by a favorite grandmother, an old family recipe written on an index card, or a page from a diary.

So, at "Take My Word For It!" we're not only cheerleaders for the art of creative writing, we're big believers in the importance of using handwriting to compose it.

Here's to paper and pencil!

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Celebrate Mother's Day with a Mother-Daughter Workshop!

Join us for a Mother-Daughter Creative Writing Adventure!(grandmothers & grand-daughters, aunts and nieces, etc. welcome too!)

We have just the panacea for the hustle and bustle of a busy week!

 

MotherDaughter Poetry

 

Celebrate Mother's Day by spending an afternoon leaping into your imagination and swimming around in your creativity! Our adventure with pencil and paper for mothers and their daughters will lead both of you to little-explored places and give you the satisfaction that comes from creating something new.

Register under "Mother-Daughter Workshop"

The Day’s Creative Indulgences: Where do writers get their ideas? Explore the art of found inspiration and hunting down the creative spark in unexpected places.

The Writer's Brew: Explore how to make your writing zing, snap and crackle!

Two Heads Are Better Than One: Mother and Daughter co-author a mini-masterpiece!

Mother - Daughter Workshop dates & times:

  • Saturday, May 10th, 2014 (the day before Mother's Day!)  from 10:00am - 11:30am at 18 Reasons, 3674 18th Street in the Mission District

Cost: $100 per mother-daughter pair ($90 per pair if 2 sets register at the same time)

To register, click here!

 

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Self Portraits from Crocker Highlands

Our mission at "Take My Word For It!" is to help kids write, but perhaps more importantly, to encourage kids to find their own voices and accept themselves just as they are. In keeping with that goal, these TMWFI kids were asked to draw and describe themselves in a self portrait. Title: Outer Space Self Portrait Excerpt: "I am unique because I have brown eyes and black slicked hair...I want to be seen as somebody brave, strong, and talented, who never gives up." -Matt

 

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Title: Self Portrait Excerpt: "I want more time for self portraits and the world." -Lyla

 

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Title: Self Portrait Excerpt: "What makes me distinct is my freckles and my kindness because I love to help out. When I grow up I want to be an animator, an artist, a writer, or president." -Emilia

 

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Title: Me Excerpt: "Me: my smile is the widest smile. My hair is to my shoulders, my freckles...I want to be an artist and author." -Hedy

 

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Title: Madelyn

Excerpt: "I am changing. Year and year, day and day, becoming smarter and more athletic."-Madelyn

   

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Title: Don, don, don

Excerpt: "I change all the time... I change by my style and personality." -Julia

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Title: Score 100,000

Excerpt: "I want people to see me as funny, smart, good at games, and a good writer."

-Justice

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Title: Oliver

Excerpt: "What makes me distinct is that my eyes change color. I want people to see me as smart, adventurous, and brave."-Oliver

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Title: My Animal Friends

Excerpt: "I am me because no one else in the world talks like me, sounds like me, no one else acts like me, and loves animals just as much as I love animals. -Kaitlyn

   

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Title: Self Portrait Outer Space

Excerpt: "I imagine myself in college as tall and athletic. And I want to study to be a scientist/inventor." -Sean

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Title: I Love New York

Excerpt: "I would like to become an artist and musician...I think my culture and my singing voice make me distinct." -Mila

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Title: Self Portrait

Excerpt: "I want to help protect the animals. I love  animals." -Iona

     

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Title: Dinosaur Land and Epic Land

Excerpt: "What makes me me is I like the world (and I like to eat candy and pizza)." -Kyra

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Secrets! from our young writers at Weibel Elementary

This spring at Weibel Elementary School in Fremont, our students have been writing about a variety of secrets--from secret codes to secret recipes--while simultaneously learning how to craft better fiction using classic story elements such as plot, setting, character. The writing has been spectacular, quirky, and creative. Here are some snippets:  

Weibel Elementary TMWFI

 

 

 

 

From: Secret Recipes (Students create their own secret recipe - for anything!)

How to Make Fizz Soup

Ingredients (which you probably don't have) 2 rocks from Mars 6 white sea urchins 7 c flour 1/2 c green tea 1/6 c melted Pluto ice rocks 1 c tomato sauce (or any sauce you like) 8 cactus spines 1/4 c butter other spices that you like Step One: Squeeze the sea urchins until they're dry. Step Two: Wash the melted ice rocks from Pluto, and slice the sea urchins and cactus spines. Step Three: Mix the flour and butter until you get a thick paste. Step Four: Add green tea until the thick paste becomes much more watery. Step Five: Take the cut sea urchins and cactus spines and crush them to tiny bits and put them with the mixture. Step Six: Stir. Add sauce and spices. Step Seven: Add Mars rocks and ENJOY

--Alisha

Recipe for Chicken Sauté with Peanut Sauce Which Gives You Special Powers

Regular Ingredients: Chicken from 3 chickens in California Peanuts from a farm in Cape Town, South Africa Milk from a cow in Calcutta, India Sugar from a plant in Hawaii Magical Ingredients: A frog's wart A piece of coral from the Great Barrier Reef Water from the Caspian Sea Exactly 1 lb of sand Note: Recipe must be made at exactly 6:30 PM every year on June 21.

Instructions:

1. Get a really huge cauldron 2. Dump all the ingredients in the cauldron 3. Let it sit there. 4. At around 6, June 21, put the mixture in the freezer 5. At around 6:10 boil the mixture until 6:30 6. It will be finally ready to eat for magical powers at 6:30'

--Atri

From: Secret Codes (Students created secret codes with partners and then wrote stories inspired by the codes.)

His mother saw the message. She jumped and she asked Percy, "Where did you find this?"

He said, "At the park."

She ran to the park and Percy followed. his mom dug a hole really deep, then picked up something. She told Percy to open it. He did, then a gleaming light came out and Percy saw a bunch of treasure and gold. His mother said, "This is a treasure people fought a war for, now it is yours...forever."

--Shivam

From: Secrets on the Line (Each student selects a secret that is written on a piece of paper hung on a clothesline. That secret becomes the centerpiece of his/her story.)

Adam then shows me his rather ugly so-called "time machine."

"It's just a cardboard box!" I said impatiently.

"Yeah, but it's magical, and I got it from rentatimemachine.com. They even delivered it to me in two days!" said Adam, quite proud of himself for finding that website.

"So, you didn't build it yourself?" I asked, puzzled.

"Of course I didn't. I just told you that I got it from rentatimemachine.com," said Adam, laughing his head off.

"Oh yeah," I said, blushing.

"Where should we go?" asked Adam.

--Chaitanya

 

My secret started when I saw a sparkling, dusty blob in the sky, not much bigger than my fingernail. It flew around and seemed to say, "Com on! Let's go!" I just rubbed my eyes to see if it was true that I had seen a real life fairy. But, when I looked back again, it was gone, so I just went back into the house. When I got inside, I ran to my room and I started drawing fairies.

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One day, I decided to go off for an adventure to find out what was causing my troubles...Suddenly, a mysterious force pulled me upwards. I climbed into a parachute that was made of grass and leaves. I climbed inside and it floated to a shiny wonderland.

--Shreya

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Treasures from the Students at Marshall Road

This session of "Take My Word For It!" at Marshall Road was all about treasures. What makes a treasure a treasure? Where and how do we find treasures? Can a person be a treasure? From long lost twins to treasures found in the backs of taxi cabs, the treasures imagined by the writers at Marshall Road were inventive, exciting, and written with great care.  

Screaming Donut

Hi, I’m Fabi. I’m ten years old. Guess what happened to me. I lost a sceaming donut in a taxi! I mean, even I know that screaming donuts are so creepy, but I really liked that guy… or girl donut so I didn’t care. It was the screaming donut’s birthday! I guess I could tell you the story…

It was my screaming donut’s birthday, so I was going to take her on her first taxi ride. Cool, right! Well, not cool. I was hungry and I decided to go get some coffee and I left her in the cab! Poor screaming donut. I looked for her for 15 minutes. So long!

Then a week later, I was really hungry and going to get some coffee when I saw the taxi driver on the street yelling like some crazy guy. He was telling the world that he saw a screaming donut. That was it! Breathlessly, I asked him if he knew where she was. He said she ran away.

I was getting really hungry so I was going to have some pizza of sorrow. Then, I saw her-my screaming donut on the street! We ran toward each other in slow motion. I hugged her and hugged her so much that… I ate her. Ooops, my bad!

-FABI

(From: I left a treasure in a taxi cab!)

The Thief’s Cane

Once there was a thief who lost his cane, which he used to help him when he was on a trip to steal stuff. He mostly used it to make his trips more successful. He could grab things with it and store things in his cane which was much bigger than it looked. But one day, he lost his cane and after that his thieving trips weren’t so successful.

A few weeks later, he was outside walking to the store and he saw a paper hung up on a tree. He got curious, so he read the paper and saw that someone had lost an incredible thing. He really really wanted that thing. It was a treasure. So that night, the thief went to the museum where all the lost items are to see where that lost item was. He tip-toed right in and began his search.

UP AND DOWN, LEFT AND RIGHT, it seemed like it wasn’t there. Finally, he recognized something familiar. He was happy he found it and proud of himself. It was his lost cane!

But then he heard someone coming so he hid.

He was very frightened of being caught. It was a police officer, who had heard him make noise. The office didn’t see anyone so he went away. The thief was so happy that he forgot to get the first item that he liked. From his fright, he never stole again.

-ZAINAB

(From: The Museum of Found Objects)

Funion Cun and His Diamond

“Have a fit body, run run run,”

Said good old Funion Cun.

Funion Cun was a very rich man,

For he had a diamond, one special diamond,

Shaped like a can.

He thought with it, laughed with it, played with it, fought with it, but there is one thing Funion Cun never dared to do.

And that was give his diamond to the man with only one shoe

Or give it to the lady who’s making a zoo,

Never to the man who paints big doors.

Said Funion Cun, “I loved my diamond ever so much,

I prepared to give her a ring.

But when I asked her to marry me,

She said nothing.”

-- REAGAN

(From: The Story of a Valuable Object)

Missing Shoes in NYC

I was running to catch a cab in New York. That busy place (ugh). It’s always sooo hard to catch a cab, but I did it! When I stepped into the cab, I gave the cabbie my name, Veronica Joni. I’m a famous actress from the one and only smash hit Lucky Gold.

As the cabbie drove away, I applied my cherry red lipstick and my so thick mascara. A girl does her makeup, people, duh! Suddenly, the cab came to a complete halt. It was at my destination, downtown New York. That’s where all the starz go. As I left, I made sure I had everything: purse, nail polish… but not my extra pair of expensive shoes. My shoes! Oh my goodness. How could I forget those shoes? They cost $500, and that was the price on sale! Besides, Veronica Joni, does not forget stuff (actually, I do, but that’s not the point!).

Before I thought it through, I grabbed my cell and called 911! It takes forever for the police to pick up the phone, even when someone calls 911. Finally they picked up.

“Hello, how may I help you?” the man’s voice came through the other line.

“Yes hi, I need to report that my designer shoes have gone missing,” I said.

“Uh… I’m sorry, ma’am. We can’t help you,” the policeman said, giving me the bad news.

“But I’m Veronica Joni, you have to respect--hello?” Darn those police officers, hanging up during the worst emergency ever! And to think they say they’re the best in New York.

Get yourself together, Veronica, I told myself over and over. I’ll get those shoes. But three days later all I could think was, I won’t get those shoes. The cabbie hadn’t called me back in three dumb days, agh! I did give him my number. People can take precautions, right? Thank goodness the the taxi programs have daily route maps. I went to the nearest taxi booth and grabbed a map. I looked at the map and noticed that the next stop was downtown New York, where I was! The cab would be here any minute.

Two hours later, the cab was there. I tried to look my best, but my hair was frizzy because I was very impatient.

“Sir, remember me, Veronica Jon--”

“No.” the cabbie rudely interrupted.

“”Okay, um, I think I left my designer shoes in your cab.” I waited for a response.

“Oh, you mean these beauties?” The cabbie handed me back my shoes… but not all in one piece.

“Ahhh!” I cried, wiping tears off my face. “What happened to my shoes?” I whined.

“Funny story, they fell into the mud and then got ripped and chewed on,” the cabbie explained.

“Who chewed on them? And by the way, that story was not funny!”

“Me,” the cabbie admitted. “Sorry, I’m weird like that. Eating shoes is my thing. My mom made me stop eating glue sticks, and what else was I supposed to eat, French fries?”

It’s okay, Veronica. It’s okay, I told myself. I took a deep breath and told the cabbie that I didn’t need those shoes back. What I didn’t tell him was that he was about to get sued!

-- KENNEDY

(From: I Left a Treasure in a Taxi Cab!)

Found Poem

Fun

Music

like smoothies…

Smoothies where you rock out.

Energized, Happy, Purple, Orange

Pink-cloud-tropical-cool-springy smoothies.

-- CAMILLA

(From: Found Poetry)

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