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You Read it Here First! Next Chapter Club: Frozen in Time

In this writing activity, we asked members of our Next Chapter Club to use personalization to create a clock character who decides that he’s/she’s tired of keeping time.  Below is a unique story written by Charlotte:

"I moaned with agony as the kindergardeners shrieked.

I could not stand these children. Always screaming, and their teacher would just put in ear plugs and sip her coffee.

No one ever thought of me. I mean, I'm just a clock fairy. You know, the little creature that makes the hands spin on clocks? But they thought I was the clock. Nothing more. And people tend not to care about the hearing of inanimate objects.

One day, I just snapped. The children were screaming their lungs out during Free Time, while the teacher just sat there at her laptop, ear plugs firmly wedged in place.

And I decided I couldn't stand another second. I stopped turning the hands, and kept it that way until the janitor took my clock down. And I had another stroke of luck-- the fairy in the fifth-grade classroom was being promoted to a clock at a basketball stadium, and I moved into that clock.

And I lived happily ever after."

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Why Not Write Wednesday? It's Raining

Every Wednesday our creative writing prompt challenges you to pick up your pen and indulge your author self!  Today's prompt is about stormy weather - Do you know this poem?  "It's raining; it's pouring.  The old man is snoring.  He went to bed and bumped his head and he wouldn't get up in the morning."  What do you think happens next?  How did the old man bump his head?  Who is trying to wake him up?  Is it the old man's job to make the rain stop?

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WRITE OUT LOUD! at Chabot Elementary

Chabot 11-5-14 at 2.57 PMWe started a new program for 3rd-5th graders at Chabot Elementary this fall: WRITE OUT LOUD!, a songwriting class led by two veteran teachers, Annah Wilson & Joseph Shumake. The students worked both independently and collaboratively to write lyrics, work out rhythms, create bridges and make music. We think the videos speak for themselves (check them out: a looping exercise & testing out lyrics).

Student excerpts from lyric writing exercises: Stick to Me

Do you see that the sky is calling… Do you see, do you see, that the sky is calling…

Too Much Too Late Too Much You big fool

If you don’t… the sun will burn and the rain will start If you don’t… the sun will burn and the rain will start

Too much Too late Too much Hurry Up

I’m in a far away town Waiting for you

(Too Late) (Too Late)

-Andrea

Up and Down

The sun comes up, the sun goes down The moon comes up, big, full and round

Big and round Up and down In the night Things spin me around

The planets spin ‘round and ‘round Nothings there, just darkness in the air

Big and round Up and down In the night Things spin me around

-Ashley

Blue Day

I had a sad, blue day So I decided to push it away

You make me stay When I want to go You make me go When I wish I could stay

I’m far away from yesterday I feel like I want to wreck this day

You make me stay When I want to go You make me go When I wish I could stay

You are mine and I am yours Don’t put me away, don’t close the door

Make me stay But I want to go Make me go When I wish I could stay

-Ilyasia

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Odes to Food & More from our Young Writers at Sunset Elementary

SUNSET Fall 2014 TMWFIThis fall the 3rd-5th grade students at Sunset Elementary focused their creativity on food writing. Using all of their senses to write similes and metaphors, to personify food, making them characters in exploring their worlds and going on adventures; they've written odes to the food they like best, and even recipes of themselves.  

From "Odes to Food"

Ode to Melons

In Summertime melons roam the streets of the city. Honey Dew Melon is as sweet as candy. Hiding in people's bags until they get home. Until he or she takes out a knife and slices the melon by its wrinkly skin. Juice gushes out, and the melon is cut into two perfect halves. by JENNIFER

Ode to Pound Cake

Oh Pound Cake. You are Mt. Everest just waiting for me to take a huge lion bite out of you. Whenever I see you I have no idea of where to start munching. Every part of you is delicious and sweet. Even if you gave me a huge, legendary stomach ache I would still gobble you up like a tiger eating a deer. by JASPER

Ode to French Fries

I walked over to delicious heaven. The item was aware of what was about to happen. It ran when it was being seasoned with salt. It ran when into obstacles all over. Finally it stopped moving. A giant picked it up. CHOP CHOP by MATT

Ode to Watermelon

Everything is miserable without watermelon. Its juicy red flesh tastes like heaven. When you take a bite, and the juicy runs down your hands like a flood, you are filled with happiness. Its green skin is like a maze, when you finally finish, you get your prize. by ISABEL From: Descriptive writing about a food you hate.

Mushrooms

At first, I didn't like mushrooms, even though I had never tried one. Then, one day, I went to my Bubba and Zieda's house. They made something that consisted of pasta (which I like) and mushrooms. I tried one of the mushrooms, unsure of what would happen next. I popped it into my mouth, and did a cross between spitting it out and chocking on it. I knew I wouldn't like them. by SYLVIA

Food Experience!

My whole family was urging me on. The green, wet broccoli was just sitting there on my plate. When I picked it up, it felt odd and cold. I closed my eyes and took a bite. It was GREAT! by DIADORA    

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Why Not Write Wednesday? Thanksgiving

Every Wednesday our creative writing prompt challenges you to pick up your pen and indulge your author self!  Today's prompt has a theme you may have guessed - Thanksgiving: As you prepare to celebrate tomorrow, what are you thankful for? Write a little poem about the things you are thankful for in your life. Are you thankful for people who love you and friends to play with? Are you thankful for soccer or pumpkin pie or good books to read? Share your poem with your friends and family.

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Why Not Write Wednesday? Buried Treasure

Every Wednesday our creative writing prompt challenges you to pick up your pen and indulge your author self!  Today's prompt is about buried treasure: Imagine you are playing in the park and spot something shiny in the bushes. You take a stick and dig around the object and pull out a shiny golden ring. Whose ring is it? Where is it from? How old is it? What do you do next?

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